The Growth Essay

 For me, thinking about my college essay is a daunting task, every time I sit down ready to “lock in” and write my personal statement, I doubt myself. I start second guessing each word that I type because I don't know if I really am saying what the colleges want me to say or even if I am portraying myself as the peron they want me to be. 

Recently, in class, we took an assessment that was designed to assess our core values and figure out which values are most important to us. As I was going through the assessment and reading the scenarios to choose between values, I started to discover more about myself, values I never even thought off started to populate and soon I discovered that growth one of my top three values.

Going hand in hand with this is a video we watched in class as well, it discussed how to write a good essay and what Admissions Officers are really looking for in a candidate. I learned that Admissions Officers don’t want to hear about your gazillion awards or perfect SAT score, but actually are looking for your ability to grow into they person they want their college to represent.

 And now, after learning this, I’ve found it a whole lot easier to get over the hump when I’m writing because now I know what value is most important in expressing throughout my essay.


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